Fourth Flowing Poem: PARENTS

Umm Aysha

*Strive for Jannah*
Bismillah,

Assalamualaykum Wa Rahmatullahi wa Barakatuh,

In continuation of the Flowing poem game, we make the next topic, which is about Parents.

Forth Flowing Poem: PARENTS

Do you like poetry? Alhamdulillah, i do!
Basically, in this section you may wish to contribute to TurnToIslam's 'Flowing Poem'!

All you have to do is:
Write a line or two in this piece and if Allah permitts, it'll turn out to be a beautiful poem created by us all, through our Unity!

Each time you add a line, be sure to make it bold. Put the key down also,
e.g.
Line 1: Mabsoot
Line 2: alhamdulillah
Line 3: Andalusion
Line 4: Umm Aysha..... etc .... (the key is: Line 1, 2, 3, 4 and then your user ID....)

This is just to see who wrote what, though the wisdom behinde it again is UNITY Insha'Allah!

Our Forth topic is about the "Parents"
You may also wish to add some repetitive words/sentences if you please....or perhaps not!

Once you've come up with your line, copy the poem DO NOT quote it, then paste it on your post, followed by your line Insha'Allah....
This is so the poem stays attached together!

Lets give it a go then....everyone join in.....the poem will follow in the post below Insha'Allah...

Wasalamu Alaykum
 

Umm Aysha

*Strive for Jannah*
Bismillah

Line 1: 'Jazakallah Mum and Dad for saving me from doing misdeeds,
May Allah above bless you for guiding me to increase good deeds.'
Line 2:

Key: Line 1: Umm Aysha
 

Sulikha

Tawakal-Allal-Allah
Bismillah

Line 1: 'Jazakallah Mum and Dad for saving me from doing misdeeds,
May Allah above bless you for guiding me to increase good deeds.'
Line 2: 'As I come to this world, knowing nothing about it. O father and mother, your teaching and mercy did I get this far,
with The help of Allah.
O Allah! Bestow on MY father and mother Your mercy,
Just as they cherished me in childhood.
Line 3:

Key: Line 2: Sulikha
 

proud2bemuslim

ALLAH HU AKBAR
Bismillah

Line 1:
'Jazakallah Mum and Dad for saving me from doing misdeeds,
May Allah above bless you for guiding me to increase good deeds.'
Line 2: 'As I come to this world, knowing nothing about it. O father and mother, your teaching and mercy did I get this far,
with The help of Allah.
O Allah! Bestow on MY father and mother Your mercy,
Just as they cherished me in childhood.
Line 3: Mum and Dad you are the best,
you taught me Islam and said this life is a test

Key:Line 3: Zubair
 

Umm Aysha

*Strive for Jannah*
Bismillah

Line 1:
'Jazakallah Mum and Dad for saving me from doing misdeeds,
May Allah above bless you for guiding me to increase good deeds.'
Line 2: 'As I come to this world, knowing nothing about it. O father and mother, your teaching and mercy did I get this far,
with The help of Allah.
O Allah! Bestow on MY father and mother Your mercy,
Just as they cherished me in childhood.
Line 3: Mum and Dad you are the best,
you taught me Islam and said this life is a test
Line 4: 'You are my parents, i LOVE you both so dearly,
When i feel your in the wrong i am quiet and remain with you patiently .
Line 5:

Key:Line 4: Umm Aysha
 

samiha

---------
Staff member

Line 1:
'Jazakallah Mum and Dad for saving me from doing misdeeds,
May Allah above bless you for guiding me to increase good deeds.'
Line 2: 'As I come to this world, knowing nothing about it. O father and mother, your teaching and mercy did I get this far,
with The help of Allah.
O Allah! Bestow on MY father and mother Your mercy,
Just as they cherished me in childhood.
Line 3: Mum and Dad you are the best,
you taught me Islam and said this life is a test
Line 4: 'You are my parents, i LOVE you both so dearly,
When i feel your in the wrong i am quiet and remain with you patiently .
Line 5:Mom, Mum, Ammu, Ummi, it doesn't matter how I call,
You are my comfort, the one to pick me up when I fall.
Line 6:

Key:Line 5: Samiha
 

samiha

---------
Staff member

Line 1:
'Jazakallah Mum and Dad for saving me from doing misdeeds,
May Allah above bless you for guiding me to increase good deeds.'
Line 2: 'As I come to this world, knowing nothing about it. O father and mother, your teaching and mercy did I get this far,
with The help of Allah.
O Allah! Bestow on MY father and mother Your mercy,
Just as they cherished me in childhood.
Line 3: Mum and Dad you are the best,
you taught me Islam and said this life is a test
Line 4: 'You are my parents, i LOVE you both so dearly,
When i feel your in the wrong i am quiet and remain with you patiently .
Line 5:Mom, Mum, Ammu, Ummi, it doesn't matter how I call,
You are my comfort, the one to pick me up when I fall.
Line 6:My father you are my protector, my guide and advisor,
You are my wall when tired, and you bring me back to righteousness when I deter.
Line 7:

Key:Line 6: Samiha

(srry i had to do two, I couldn't leave either part out!)
 

Sulikha

Tawakal-Allal-Allah
Line 1: 'Jazakallah Mum and Dad for saving me from doing misdeeds,
May Allah above bless you for guiding me to increase good deeds.'
Line 2: 'As I come to this world, knowing nothing about it. O father and mother, your teaching and mercy did I get this far,
with The help of Allah.
O Allah! Bestow on MY father and mother Your mercy,
Just as they cherished me in childhood.
Line 3: Mum and Dad you are the best,
you taught me Islam and said this life is a test
Line 4: 'You are my parents, i LOVE you both so dearly,
When i feel your in the wrong i am quiet and remain with you patiently .
Line 5:Mom, Mum, Ammu, Ummi, it doesn't matter how I call,
You are my comfort, the one to pick me up when I fall.
Line 6:My father you are my protector, my guide and advisor,
You are my wall when tired, and you bring me back to righteousness when I deter.
Line 7: O' Father and Mother you had a positive effect on me
during my childhood and growing years, pray for me as,
I hope to do the same positive effect for my beloved children.
May Allah give you Janatul-Firdous.
Line 8:

key: Line 7: Sulikha.
 

Umm Aysha

*Strive for Jannah*
Line 1: 'Jazakallah Mum and Dad for saving me from doing misdeeds,
May Allah above bless you for guiding me to increase good deeds.'
Line 2: 'As I come to this world, knowing nothing about it. O father and mother, your teaching and mercy did I get this far,
with The help of Allah.
O Allah! Bestow on MY father and mother Your mercy,
Just as they cherished me in childhood.
Line 3: Mum and Dad you are the best,
you taught me Islam and said this life is a test
Line 4: 'You are my parents, i LOVE you both so dearly,
When i feel your in the wrong i am quiet and remain with you patiently .
Line 5:Mom, Mum, Ammu, Ummi, it doesn't matter how I call,
You are my comfort, the one to pick me up when I fall.
Line 6:My father you are my protector, my guide and advisor,
You are my wall when tired, and you bring me back to righteousness when I deter.
Line 7: O' Father and Mother you had a positive effect on me
during my childhood and growing years, pray for me as,
I hope to do the same positive effect for my beloved children.
May Allah give you Janatul-Firdous.
Line 8:'You were always there to help me,
You were always there to guide me.
But most important you were always there to love me.'
I would like to share this love with you eternally.'
Line 9:

key: Line 8: Umm Aysha
 

Love my islam

Junior Member
Line 1: 'Jazakallah Mum and Dad for saving me from doing misdeeds,
May Allah above bless you for guiding me to increase good deeds.'
Line 2: 'As I come to this world, knowing nothing about it. O father and mother, your teaching and mercy did I get this far,
with The help of Allah.
O Allah! Bestow on MY father and mother Your mercy,
Just as they cherished me in childhood.
Line 3: Mum and Dad you are the best,
you taught me Islam and said this life is a test
Line 4: 'You are my parents, i LOVE you both so dearly,
When i feel your in the wrong i am quiet and remain with you patiently .
Line 5: 'Mom, Mum, Ammu, Ummi, it doesn't matter how I call,
You are my comfort, the one to pick me up when I fall.
Line 6:'My father you are my protector, my guide and advisor,
You are my wall when tired, and you bring me back to righteousness when I deter.
Line 7: O' Father and Mother you had a positive effect on me
during my childhood and growing years, pray for me as,
I hope to do the same positive effect for my beloved children.
May Allah give you Janatul-Firdous.
Line 8:'You were always there to help me,
You were always there to guide me.
But most important you were always there to love me.'
I would like to share this love with you eternally.'
line 9: O father O mother you taught me to pray
You guide me so I wont go astray
Line 10:

Key: Line 9: Love_my_Islam
 

Umm Aysha

*Strive for Jannah*
Line 1: 'Jazakallah Mum and Dad for saving me from doing misdeeds,
May Allah above bless you for guiding me to increase good deeds.'
Line 2: 'As I come to this world, knowing nothing about it. O father and mother, your teaching and mercy did I get this far,
with The help of Allah.
O Allah! Bestow on MY father and mother Your mercy,
Just as they cherished me in childhood.
Line 3: Mum and Dad you are the best,
you taught me Islam and said this life is a test
Line 4: 'You are my parents, i LOVE you both so dearly,
When i feel your in the wrong i am quiet and remain with you patiently .
Line 5: 'Mom, Mum, Ammu, Ummi, it doesn't matter how I call,
You are my comfort, the one to pick me up when I fall.
Line 6:'My father you are my protector, my guide and advisor,
You are my wall when tired, and you bring me back to righteousness when I deter.
Line 7: O' Father and Mother you had a positive effect on me
during my childhood and growing years, pray for me as,
I hope to do the same positive effect for my beloved children.
May Allah give you Janatul-Firdous.
Line 8:'You were always there to help me,
You were always there to guide me.
But most important you were always there to love me.'
I would like to share this love with you eternally.'
line 9: O father O mother you taught me to pray
You guide me so I wont go astray
Line 10:'Jazakallah for the Islamic upbringing
Teaching me to refrain from sinning.'
Line 11:

Key: Line 10: Umm Aysha
 

Mabsoot

Amir
Staff member
Line 1: 'Jazakallah Mum and Dad for saving me from doing misdeeds,
May Allah above bless you for guiding me to increase good deeds.'
Line 2: 'As I come to this world, knowing nothing about it. O father and mother, your teaching and mercy did I get this far,
with The help of Allah.
O Allah! Bestow on MY father and mother Your mercy,
Just as they cherished me in childhood.
Line 3: Mum and Dad you are the best,
you taught me Islam and said this life is a test
Line 4: 'You are my parents, i LOVE you both so dearly,
When i feel your in the wrong i am quiet and remain with you patiently .
Line 5: 'Mom, Mum, Ammu, Ummi, it doesn't matter how I call,
You are my comfort, the one to pick me up when I fall.
Line 6:'My father you are my protector, my guide and advisor,
You are my wall when tired, and you bring me back to righteousness when I deter.
Line 7: O' Father and Mother you had a positive effect on me
during my childhood and growing years, pray for me as,
I hope to do the same positive effect for my beloved children.
May Allah give you Janatul-Firdous.
Line 8:'You were always there to help me,
You were always there to guide me.
But most important you were always there to love me.'
I would like to share this love with you eternally.'
line 9: O father O mother you taught me to pray
You guide me so I wont go astray
Line 10:'Jazakallah for the Islamic upbringing
Teaching me to refrain from sinning.'
Line 11: May Allah bless them for teaching me right
Always helping and keeping me in their sight.

Key: Line 11: Mabsoot
 

alhamdulillah

Junior Member
Line 1: 'Jazakallah Mum and Dad for saving me from doing misdeeds,
May Allah above bless you for guiding me to increase good deeds.'
Line 2: 'As I come to this world, knowing nothing about it. O father and mother, your teaching and mercy did I get this far,
with The help of Allah.
O Allah! Bestow on MY father and mother Your mercy,
Just as they cherished me in childhood.
Line 3: Mum and Dad you are the best,
you taught me Islam and said this life is a test
Line 4: 'You are my parents, i LOVE you both so dearly,
When i feel your in the wrong i am quiet and remain with you patiently .
Line 5: 'Mom, Mum, Ammu, Ummi, it doesn't matter how I call,
You are my comfort, the one to pick me up when I fall.
Line 6:'My father you are my protector, my guide and advisor,
You are my wall when tired, and you bring me back to righteousness when I deter.
Line 7: O' Father and Mother you had a positive effect on me
during my childhood and growing years, pray for me as,
I hope to do the same positive effect for my beloved children.
May Allah give you Janatul-Firdous.
Line 8:'You were always there to help me,
You were always there to guide me.
But most important you were always there to love me.'
I would like to share this love with you eternally.'
line 9: O father O mother you taught me to pray
You guide me so I wont go astray
Line 10:'Jazakallah for the Islamic upbringing
Teaching me to refrain from sinning.'
Line 11: May Allah bless them for teaching me right
Always helping and keeping me in their sight.
Line 12: 'Never would i dare to raise my voice over you
dear mother dear father, by Allah i deeply love you'
Line 13:


Key: Line 12: alhamdulillah
 

PaxVobiscum

Submitted'nSatisfied
Though this flowing poem seems to have come to a halt for some time now, parents' love is such a perennial theme that it could go forever and ever...so here it goes..

Line 1: 'Jazakallah Mum and Dad for saving me from doing misdeeds,
May Allah above bless you for guiding me to increase good deeds.'
Line 2: 'As I come to this world, knowing nothing about it. O father and mother, your teaching and mercy did I get this far,
with The help of Allah.
O Allah! Bestow on MY father and mother Your mercy,
Just as they cherished me in childhood.
Line 3: Mum and Dad you are the best,
you taught me Islam and said this life is a test
Line 4: 'You are my parents, i LOVE you both so dearly,
When i feel your in the wrong i am quiet and remain with you patiently .
Line 5: 'Mom, Mum, Ammu, Ummi, it doesn't matter how I call,
You are my comfort, the one to pick me up when I fall.
Line 6:'My father you are my protector, my guide and advisor,
You are my wall when tired, and you bring me back to righteousness when I deter.
Line 7: O' Father and Mother you had a positive effect on me
during my childhood and growing years, pray for me as,
I hope to do the same positive effect for my beloved children.
May Allah give you Janatul-Firdous.
Line 8:'You were always there to help me,
You were always there to guide me.
But most important you were always there to love me.'
I would like to share this love with you eternally.'
line 9: O father O mother you taught me to pray
You guide me so I wont go astray
Line 10:'Jazakallah for the Islamic upbringing
Teaching me to refrain from sinning.'
Line 11: May Allah bless them for teaching me right
Always helping and keeping me in their sight.
Line 12: 'Never would i dare to raise my voice over you
dear mother dear father, by Allah i deeply love you'
Line 13:I thank Allah and I thank you for all that you have done
And the only way I can repay is by praying to the ONE
Line 14:To place you in His loving care, the way you cared for me
To forgive you with His mercy, the way you forgave me
Line 15:I pray to Him, late every night, with tears in my eyes
To take away your every pain; to grant you paradise
Line 16:

Key: Line 13: PaxVobiscum (Naveed)
 

BintMuhammad

New Member
Staff member
Line 1: 'Jazakallah Mum and Dad for saving me from doing misdeeds,
May Allah above bless you for guiding me to increase good deeds.'
Line 2: 'As I come to this world, knowing nothing about it. O father and mother, your teaching and mercy did I get this far,
with The help of Allah.
O Allah! Bestow on MY father and mother Your mercy,
Just as they cherished me in childhood.
Line 3: Mum and Dad you are the best,
you taught me Islam and said this life is a test
Line 4: 'You are my parents, i LOVE you both so dearly,
When i feel your in the wrong i am quiet and remain with you patiently .
Line 5: 'Mom, Mum, Ammu, Ummi, it doesn't matter how I call,
You are my comfort, the one to pick me up when I fall.
Line 6:'My father you are my protector, my guide and advisor,
You are my wall when tired, and you bring me back to righteousness when I deter.
Line 7: O' Father and Mother you had a positive effect on me
during my childhood and growing years, pray for me as,
I hope to do the same positive effect for my beloved children.
May Allah give you Janatul-Firdous.
Line 8:'You were always there to help me,
You were always there to guide me.
But most important you were always there to love me.'
I would like to share this love with you eternally.'
line 9: O father O mother you taught me to pray
You guide me so I wont go astray
Line 10:'Jazakallah for the Islamic upbringing
Teaching me to refrain from sinning.'
Line 11: May Allah bless them for teaching me right
Always helping and keeping me in their sight.
Line 12: 'Never would i dare to raise my voice over you
dear mother dear father, by Allah i deeply love you'
Line 13: I thank Allah and I thank you for all that you have done
And the only way I can repay is by praying to the ONE
Line 14:To place you in His loving care, the way you cared for me
To forgive you with His mercy, the way you forgave me
Line 15:I pray to Him, late every night, with tears in my eyes
To take away your every pain; to grant you paradise
Line 16: Mom, when it's you and Dad's time to rest;
I, your daughter would take care of you with all my best.
Seeing you both hurt and sad;
just breaks my heart in two really bad.
Line 17:

Key: Line 16: hurul-ein
 

DevoutMuslimah

Junior Member
Line 1: 'Jazakallah Mum and Dad for saving me from doing misdeeds,
May Allah above bless you for guiding me to increase good deeds.'
Line 2: 'As I come to this world, knowing nothing about it. O father and mother, your teaching and mercy did I get this far,
with The help of Allah.
O Allah! Bestow on MY father and mother Your mercy,
Just as they cherished me in childhood.
Line 3: Mum and Dad you are the best,
you taught me Islam and said this life is a test
Line 4: 'You are my parents, i LOVE you both so dearly,
When i feel your in the wrong i am quiet and remain with you patiently .
Line 5: 'Mom, Mum, Ammu, Ummi, it doesn't matter how I call,
You are my comfort, the one to pick me up when I fall.
Line 6:'My father you are my protector, my guide and advisor,
You are my wall when tired, and you bring me back to righteousness when I deter.
Line 7: O' Father and Mother you had a positive effect on me
during my childhood and growing years, pray for me as,
I hope to do the same positive effect for my beloved children.
May Allah give you Janatul-Firdous.
Line 8:'You were always there to help me,
You were always there to guide me.
But most important you were always there to love me.'
I would like to share this love with you eternally.'
line 9: O father O mother you taught me to pray
You guide me so I wont go astray
Line 10:'Jazakallah for the Islamic upbringing
Teaching me to refrain from sinning.'
Line 11: May Allah bless them for teaching me right
Always helping and keeping me in their sight.
Line 12: 'Never would i dare to raise my voice over you
dear mother dear father, by Allah i deeply love you'
Line 13: I thank Allah and I thank you for all that you have done
And the only way I can repay is by praying to the ONE
Line 14:To place you in His loving care, the way you cared for me
To forgive you with His mercy, the way you forgave me
Line 15:I pray to Him, late every night, with tears in my eyes
To take away your every pain; to grant you paradise
Line 16: Mom, when it's you and Dad's time to rest;
I, your daughter would take care of you with all my best.
Seeing you both hurt and sad;
just breaks my heart in two really bad.
Line 17: But I will care for you, as you did for me,
Serving you dutifully, never frowning, but will always keep a smile,
Disgraced, Disgraced shall I be,
If I ever leave your sides.
Line 18

Key: Line 17: DevoutMuslimah
 

Umm Aysha

*Strive for Jannah*
Line 1: 'Jazakallah Mum and Dad for saving me from doing misdeeds,
May Allah above bless you for guiding me to increase good deeds.'
Line 2: 'As I come to this world, knowing nothing about it. O father and mother, your teaching and mercy did I get this far,
with The help of Allah.
O Allah! Bestow on MY father and mother Your mercy,
Just as they cherished me in childhood.
Line 3: Mum and Dad you are the best,
you taught me Islam and said this life is a test
Line 4: 'You are my parents, i LOVE you both so dearly,
When i feel your in the wrong i am quiet and remain with you patiently .
Line 5: 'Mom, Mum, Ammu, Ummi, it doesn't matter how I call,
You are my comfort, the one to pick me up when I fall.
Line 6:'My father you are my protector, my guide and advisor,
You are my wall when tired, and you bring me back to righteousness when I deter.
Line 7: O' Father and Mother you had a positive effect on me
during my childhood and growing years, pray for me as,
I hope to do the same positive effect for my beloved children.
May Allah give you Janatul-Firdous.
Line 8:'You were always there to help me,
You were always there to guide me.
But most important you were always there to love me.'
I would like to share this love with you eternally.'
line 9: O father O mother you taught me to pray
You guide me so I wont go astray
Line 10:'Jazakallah for the Islamic upbringing
Teaching me to refrain from sinning.'
Line 11: May Allah bless them for teaching me right
Always helping and keeping me in their sight.
Line 12: 'Never would i dare to raise my voice over you
dear mother dear father, by Allah i deeply love you'
Line 13: I thank Allah and I thank you for all that you have done
And the only way I can repay is by praying to the ONE
Line 14:To place you in His loving care, the way you cared for me
To forgive you with His mercy, the way you forgave me
Line 15:I pray to Him, late every night, with tears in my eyes
To take away your every pain; to grant you paradise
Line 16: Mom, when it's you and Dad's time to rest;
I, your daughter would take care of you with all my best.
Seeing you both hurt and sad;
just breaks my heart in two really bad.
Line 17: But I will care for you, as you did for me,
Serving you dutifully, never frowning, but will always keep a smile,
Disgraced, Disgraced shall I be,
If I ever leave your sides.
Line 18 'From all your teachings I cherish one,
You taught me how to live life within Islam,
"Oh Rizzy, Love Muhummad :saw: and Allah more than yourself,"
Thank you both for you taught me my Iman.'
Line 19:

Key: Line 18: Umm Aysha
 

ponderer

Junior Member
Line 1: 'Jazakallah Mum and Dad for saving me from doing misdeeds,
May Allah above bless you for guiding me to increase good deeds.'
Line 2: 'As I come to this world, knowing nothing about it. O father and mother, your teaching and mercy did I get this far,
with The help of Allah.
O Allah! Bestow on MY father and mother Your mercy,
Just as they cherished me in childhood.
Line 3: Mum and Dad you are the best,
you taught me Islam and said this life is a test
Line 4: 'You are my parents, i LOVE you both so dearly,
When i feel your in the wrong i am quiet and remain with you patiently .
Line 5: 'Mom, Mum, Ammu, Ummi, it doesn't matter how I call,
You are my comfort, the one to pick me up when I fall.
Line 6:'My father you are my protector, my guide and advisor,
You are my wall when tired, and you bring me back to righteousness when I deter.
Line 7: O' Father and Mother you had a positive effect on me
during my childhood and growing years, pray for me as,
I hope to do the same positive effect for my beloved children.
May Allah give you Janatul-Firdous.
Line 8:'You were always there to help me,
You were always there to guide me.
But most important you were always there to love me.'
I would like to share this love with you eternally.'
line 9: O father O mother you taught me to pray
You guide me so I wont go astray
Line 10:'Jazakallah for the Islamic upbringing
Teaching me to refrain from sinning.'
Line 11: May Allah bless them for teaching me right
Always helping and keeping me in their sight.
Line 12: 'Never would i dare to raise my voice over you
dear mother dear father, by Allah i deeply love you'
Line 13: I thank Allah and I thank you for all that you have done
And the only way I can repay is by praying to the ONE
Line 14:To place you in His loving care, the way you cared for me
To forgive you with His mercy, the way you forgave me
Line 15:I pray to Him, late every night, with tears in my eyes
To take away your every pain; to grant you paradise
Line 16: Mom, when it's you and Dad's time to rest;
I, your daughter would take care of you with all my best.
Seeing you both hurt and sad;
just breaks my heart in two really bad.
Line 17: But I will care for you, as you did for me,
Serving you dutifully, never frowning, but will always keep a smile,
Disgraced, Disgraced shall I be,
If I ever leave your sides.
Line 18 'From all your teachings I cherish one,
You taught me how to live life within Islam,
"Oh Rizzy, Love Muhummad and Allah more than yourself,"
Thank you both for you taught me my Iman.'
Line 19: Whenever I feel my heart with anger and sadness bound
I remember little kids having to go on without parents around
Line 20:

Key: Line 19: t3hre3m
 

ponderer

Junior Member
dont get what?

what i wrote or what you're supposed to do?

if its what i wrote:umm....haha i dunno if it makes sense...the first line....but basically whenever i feel sad or angry i remember orphans....

and if its what you're supposed to do....then just add your line to the poem by line 20, and at the end of the poem write key:xohafiaxo(your name)
so it'll be a poem that we all wrote together:)
 
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