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Muawiyah
12-16-2006, 09:28 AM
:salam2: This is another poem i have made. I hope you enjoy.



Islam is a perfect way of life,
so why stab yourself with a knife?*
Sins and Deeds are a test,
so dont be a pest.
live life like a test.
Allah is the greatest.


Allah knows all about you,
he knows what is wrong and what is true.
so dont hide it,
Just admit.

This book that is so dear to my heart
Its name is the Holy Quran
This book sent by Allah
The mercy to every woman and man

The 5th pillar of Islam,
Visit Masjid Al Haram.
Its your duty as a Muslim
to bring back Islam into this world.
* I meant by stabbing yourself with a knife, as in commiting bad sins.
SpangledStarz
12-17-2006, 04:44 PM
I like your poem, mashallah. My only tip is:
Make it longer! I would like to read more, and I'm being honest.

Jzk for the poem and may allah shower blessings upon you :)

:salam2:
Sister Starz
Muawiyah
12-19-2006, 03:49 PM
The thing is, its a bit hard for me to think of another verse since im not that creative at writing poems but i like writing poems. It calms me down.
Globalpeace
12-19-2006, 03:54 PM
Asslamo Allaikum,

I am sure that Insha’Allah it will come to you; let it flow (relax) & creativity will emerge

Jazakullah Khairun
ShaheedU
12-19-2006, 03:55 PM
alhamdulillaah, it is very nice.
SpangledStarz
12-19-2006, 04:09 PM
:salam2:

The thing is, its a bit hard for me to think of another verse since im not that creative at writing poems but i like writing poems. It calms me down.


I know! How about writing the 3rd line about quran?

Maybe something like:

This book that is so dear to my heart
Its name is the Holy Quran
This book sent by Allah
The mercy to every woman and man

I know my verse doesn't fit and it isn't very good but its an example and if you want to use an idea from it feel free to!

And a 4th about faith? Maybe turn it into the 5 pillars of Islam and have your poem at the front?
You can use this site for help:
Click here :D (http://www.rhymezone.com/)

My salams to you all and Jazakallahu khair for your beautiful poem
Sister Starz
Marwa17
12-19-2006, 06:37 PM
nice poem
Salam
Sister S
12-19-2006, 09:15 PM
:salam2:

:ma:

nice poem. good luck with other poems hope to read more inshallah.

:wasalam: