2 Poems about Death

[rufnek2k6]

:salam2:

I've never really written poems before, but 2 weeks ago, someone i knew from college died and this made me think about death. Then I wrote the following 2 poems. They may not be as good as the others here but bear in mind it is my first attempt.

My Journey's End has arrived,
From life i have been deprived,
But dont take this as a note of complaint,
An unwanted fate this certainly aint,
In my Creator i put my trust,
And on my coffin are layers of dust,
But I am high up above the sky,
With the Angels I do fly,
Looking down on you from up above,
Waiting for the moment I'll meet you my love


Here I lie, 6 foot under,
Nothing to do, But time to wonder,
What kind of life did i live?
What did i take and what did i give?
Was I fair in all that I done?
Mistakes I regret now time is gone,
My life, my future, what did it hold?
I'll never know as now its gone cold



well, what do you think??

:wasalam:

[wannabe_muttaqi]

Mashallah, it is very good bro. I would rate it high.

[MUHAMM7D]

Jazakallahu khayran for sharing.

[deepheart]

Assalam alaikum brother.

If this is your first attempt
Then here's my comment
You've got talent
But don't know it yet.

Both poems contain much truth
We should put them to good use
By remembering death
And living by ALLAH 's rules.

Salam,

deepheart

[rufnek2k6]

jazakallah for your comments, I thought they were quite good too when i worte them. i think it was just due to the state of mind I was in at the time. Ill try writing some more, hopefully on a more joyful topic.

walaykum asalaam

[hqudrat]

:salam2:
Jazakallah,it 's a good poem.it makes me think of the last day on this earth and to be a good muslim,because death is the reality. which everyone is going to taste.May Allah forgive us our sins ameen
:wasalam:


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[hijab_sister]

salam
mashallah.GREAT BROTHER.THANX FOR SHA.RING.
WASLAM

[Akilah]

MASHALLAH THEY'RE VERY GOOD. KEEP ON WRITING IN YOUR SPARE TIME.

[sarah b b]

al salam wa 3alykom,
this is my first day on this web site n i have been so inspired by all of u guys mashalla. ur poem was the first poem i have read on this web site and i have got to tell u mashalla u're r gifted, tht poem was out standing, it was amazin n really touchin, i got tears in my eyes readin it. anywayz, i hope i could fit in this site bcz i would really like 2 knw more abt my religion which i knw very little abt. god bless u :)
i am sarah by the way.
salam. :)

[Muslim-life]

Mashallah that was beautifulll, bro..

I got tears in my eyes when i read it...<3

thanx for sharing

[xohanifaxo]

mashallah it was nice....way way way better than what i can do