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Umm Aysha
06-03-2007, 01:14 PM
Asalaamu Alaykum Wa Rahmatullahi Wa Barakatahu


Actions speak louder than words


Once I was walking down the road
On a dark and foggy night
When there was hardly any light

I called out “Hey, mister, What’s your name?”
At first there was no reply
Perhaps he was a little shy

I called out yet again
But it was all in vain
I was about to give up when it suddenly began to rain
And as we ran helter, skelter
To find ourselves shelter
He opened his umbrella
Willing to share
And then I realized that my friend of few words
Really did care

And as we huddle together, cold and numb
I realized that my friend couldn’t speak
Because he was deaf and dumb

And then a sudden thought flashed through my mind
Do we really need words to be kind?
What words couldn’t do, his actions had done
For life long in me
A friend he had won!

wsalaam

alkathiri
06-03-2007, 01:24 PM
:salam2:
JazakAllah khair .
very nice:)

halah
06-03-2007, 02:22 PM
:hearts: It's really wonderful and completely true:ma:

Libinette
06-03-2007, 02:43 PM
Jazakiallah Kheir sis, that was a sweeet poem, mashallah

abdallahbilal
06-03-2007, 06:28 PM
:salam2:
Very nice I liked it.
:mashallah:

surprized eyez
06-06-2007, 07:50 PM
Very touching poem,and so true actions speak louder than words.:SMILY259:

Proud2BeHumble
06-06-2007, 09:03 PM
:salam2:

Very recently i started reading your poems. A true poem always comes from heart. They all are nice (in terms of word selection, content/message, use of simili, length etc) and i think in future after some final revision you may compile your best poems in a small book for children.

Your success to write should not make you slow at some point but continue to write consistently even though it is one poem in a week.

There are also some other members who are also contributing some good inspiring poems. Good luck to them as well.

Jazakallah khair,

Wasalam,

Umm Aysha
06-06-2007, 09:29 PM
Asalaamu'alaykum

Brother Proud2BeHumble just wanted to clear up that these are not my poems, i would right the author but most are unknown, so subhanallah to the people who actually write these and not me. I just add to forum cos they help me first and foremost and maybe can help others too... jazakallah khayr..

wsalaam

Aliyah206
06-06-2007, 10:01 PM
thanx for taking the time to share it with us sis

Aliyah206
06-06-2007, 10:01 PM
Asalaamu'alaykum

Brother Proud2BeHumble just wanted to clear up that these are not my poems, i would right the author but most are unknown, so subhanallah to the people who actually write these and not me. I just add to forum cos they help me first and foremost and maybe can help others too... jazakallah khayr..

wsalaam
thanx for taking the time to share it with us sis

wannabe_muttaqi
06-06-2007, 10:59 PM
thanks for sharing...JAK

powerofislam
06-09-2007, 01:48 AM
really nice poem thanks for sharing